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After 2 years of a crappy comment given by me, I give you a crappier comment.
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The Good:
-pokedex with pokemon used in previous episodes
-quite long compared to most of your submissions
-used audio from newgrounds audio portal
-smoothe animation as usual
The Bad:
-cliff hanger grrr
-file size was kind of big
The Verdict:
It's been a while since your last submssion, but I understand why. You put quite a bit of effort in this episode, this one is currently your best composed work so far. The pokedex feature was a great idea, adding something else and humor. One thing that bugged me was the cliff hanger ending. Please don't say this is your last episode. 7 episodes strong is still pretty good. Great job =D
Author's Response:
Nice and thorough :)
4MB isn't too bad... and only been like 2 or 3 days... slower then usual, but still not bad :P
Thanks!
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The Good:
-quite a few selections to choose from
-mild humorous bubble icons
The Bad:
-nothing more than a e-card ap
-limited senarios
The Verdict:
E-cards are generally not my thing. I sent one to a friend anyway just to see if it worked. You should have had more than one situation other than love, like friends, enimies, etc. Quite limited indeed. I'm sure some people will enjoy this. You also threw in the dog for comical relief I guess you can say.
Author's Response:
Since it was for a "dating" blog, it sorta had to be about that but agree that we should provide the "assets" and let the user create their own scenarios. Thanks.
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The Good:
-great first flash
-tight animation
-quite intense
-quite a long flash for a firsty
The Bad:
-maybe some voice acting? I dunno
The Verdict:
This was fairly well done. It must have taken you a while to accomplish. The atmosphere also worked quite well with the movie. I'm quite impressed. Continue with making flash submissions you've got talent and potential. I'm hoping to see more of your stuff in the future.
Author's Response:
Voice acting?
Meh..I dont have the equipment at the moment to do anything like that.. and even if I did.. there would be no voice acting needed for this flash...
Thanks, though!
This is what i was looking for when I posted this on NG!
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The animation was smoothe, and the voice acting was also quite good, but I'm still trying to figure what just happened. It was a tad short which was kind of a pain, but it was cool how they both were morphing each time something happened. The last one kind of looked like a tombstone. I would like to see you add a play and pause button, as well as a preloader to your claymations, because it just keeps on looping.
Keep up the ideas and voice acting, and overall just have fun with these claymations, good job.
Author's Response:
I just got flash, so I'm still working on figuring those things out :S
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Ahahaha I love that turds voice or monster whatever it is. I'm not sure if you took it from something or if it was ACTUALLY your voice, either was I love it. This was exeptionally well done for how short it was. Let see it has a cruel sense of humor and gore. Also the monster eating the things was awesome. Smoothe animation for clay. Keep on making claymations, you obviously have a talent.
Author's Response:
nope! Twas indeed my voice. I just slowed the speed down a little to make it sound even deeper for the giant blob and sped it up to sound higher for the little blobs.
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The most memorable part of this would have to be OVER 9000!!! I noticed someone mentioned that in their past reviews. Like to see how you actually listen to the viewers. It's cool to see how there's more than just Ash talking but the voices sounded exactly the same. I also noticed a technical mistake in one of onix's moves. Slam can't effect ghost, but hey it's your movie, NOT mine. Anyways great series thus far, cheers.
Author's Response:
That's because voices are the same, I need voice actors
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I was not sure what was happening when I first played, but then I noticed it just showed them fixing up the site. It was a clever idea. I managed to get none of them and all of them on different games and still managed to see the same ending. You were strapped for time on this, but you still did an excellent job. If only there was one of them working under the tank.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you liked it. I'm pretty happy with it considering I only worked on it for a few hours.
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But it didn't really show anything more or give much more other than them explaining what is new on newgrounds. The graphics on the clocks are better than they usually are on clock movies, so that was an upgrade for something. It was kind of short, but with only having a day to finish it, I understand it would have to be a little rushed. Also nice page ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks. It was rushed because I was running on the assumption that it would be up last night. But then, it got shunned to over 24 hours after the start of the downtime!
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These runescape movies seem to be getting good. Only one point about it that I'm not happy about is that it's not referring around runescape anymore, not really making it feel like a parody, more of a blatant series. Also I would perfer hearing more runescape songs from the original game. The graphics however are still increasing at a fast speed. Hope to see number eight come out some time.
Author's Response:
nbs8 is going to be released next week. this time i'll try my current graphics and ye olde newbiescape spirit (script by erwin, voice editing and stuff by michael). the beggining was tough, ideas didn't come together, we had fights but everything's OK now. prepare yourself for newbiescape 8!
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The idea behind it is not too bad. The voice acting wasn't that good, it was hard understanding most of the jokes. The animation was not too bad and the whole movie was nice and long. Could fix the voice acting and graphics a bit. Good parody of runescape overall though.
Author's Response:
that was my first episode that got through judgement in newgrounds. it was a first movie with storyline i made. i made it 5 months after i got flash. i didn't know much actionscript then, that's why voices don't stop. anyway, i was really proud of this work, even if it's crap:) beware, cuz nbs 8 is under production!
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